I shot a small piece for the the city of Lancaster, (PA) for their new city branding. Several vignettes of businesses. Fun to use Red in a quick doc style.
your shots are great, but I find the edit needs work - particularly the speaking people need to be introduced earlier and shown more
thanks for the feedback. i appreciate it. i agree that the edit could use some more work. editing is not my strong point. i prefer to shoot and leave the edit to others. the whole thing needed to be wrapped in a crazy amount of time (as with any project) and considering the variables, overall i'm pleased. thanks again.
Great stuff man, really enjoyed watching the clips. The only thing I was going to say was exactly what Rob Ruffo said above, I'd probably show the narrator of each clip at the very start to establish a connection between the voice and the actual person, then show the other accompanying material, then again at the end with their final words. Because it's really about the people of the City of Lancaster after all.
Good stuff man. I want to visit Lancaster, PA now.
thanks sean. yeah, next time i'll make sure i'll put the individuals in context quicker.
cheers dave. that's really the best feedback i could hope for. if you(or any of you guys) ever make it to lancaster, let me know. i'll buy you a drink or three and we can talk some shop.
I'll actually take you up on that :-)
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